Ok, this is my first ever attempt at a real fanfic. I know it's a pretty long oneshot, but I do hope you enjoy it.
I'm actually quite satisfied with it. The topic and overall story could be better, but as far as compostion and such, I think it's quite well done for a first attempt.
Yes, it is about Raven, and I got the idea for this while making a b-day pic for a friend. Here's the big pic if you're interested --> [link]
Ok, in this story Raven is a lot older. How old? You tell me. Probably old teen (18 or 19) to young adult (20+). I honestly dunno, but its not really that important.
This might not make much sense if you haven't seen the episode "Birthmark" though.
Anyhoo, I don't know if you guys read the comments first, or the story, so I won't give anything away here. But I write and talk in lots of metphors. So the whole idea/meaning of this story is symbolized by certain things. As I said on the larger pic, if anyone can give me a good description of what the metaphor/story meant, then I'll give you a small request.
If I get multiple right answers, I'll probably take the most accurate one. I know I said "No more requests" in my rant a while ago, but I'm just curious to see how well I got the message across in my writing.
Pus, it gives you the motivation to really think about something.
I really would like feedback on this just from curiousity. I'm not really going to take everything to heart, because I already have my own opinion on it, but I would like to hear your honest opinion. Anyway, thanks for reading, and please excuse any errors, since I don't have a typing program on my computer yet.
I had to type all this straight into DA from my paper draft...
Teen Titans, Raven, and all the other characters in this story are not mine. They belong to DC Comics, Cartoon Network, and anyone else who owns them... I'm just a fan writing a story out of obsession.
*EDIT: Thanks to *firewalker71
, I've found out that Raven should be at least 22+ for this to make sense.
Apparently she turned 17 in "Birthmark", so I hope that helps.